Proof reading Poison’s Nothin’ But A Good Time
September 29th, 2008

I was talking to someone the other day on Twitter about whether the Poison song’s title was Nothing or Nuthin But A Good Time… yes this is what I fill my day with. Â Both of us were wrong, or maybe Poison themselves were wrong:
The Proof-read version of Nothin’ But A Good Time - I’ve assumed that any spelling mistakes are the fault of the lyrics site that I found these… my tracked changes are in italics and in red - sorry colour blind people - let me know if it’s too hard to read.
Now listen Excuse me everyone, could I have your attention please?
Not a dime I don’t have any money,  I can’t pay my rent I’m unable to pay my rentÂ
I can barely make it through the week
Saturday night I’d like to make my girl (make my girl what? Â a bagel?… Pssst… Mmmm right, OK he means what!? Â Well that’s inappropriate anyway.)
But right now I cant make ends meetIm always workin slavin working, slaving every day
Gotta I really need to get away from that same old same old
I need a chance just to get away
If you could hear me think this is what Id say (hear me think? Â isn’t that called talking?) ÂChorus:
I Dont need nothin anything except but a good time
How can I resist
Aint lookin I’m not looking for nothin anything but a good time
And it dont doesn’t get any better than thisThey say I spend my money on women and wine
But I couldnt tell you where I spent last night (see that’s not good, maybe you have a problem, do you need to talk to someone, a group maybe, need a hug?)
Im really sorry about the shape that I’m in
I just like my fun every now and thenIm always workin slavin every day
Gotta get away from that same old same old
I need a chance just to get away
If you could hear me think this is what Id say (… we’ve already talked about this section)Chorus
You see I raise a toast to all of us
Who are breakin breaking our backs every day (… ummm take a look at Poison’s photo at the top of the page and tell me if you think dudes out there digging ditches and stuff feel a kinship with Poison and their breaking their backs…)
If wantin wanting the good life is such a crime (mmmmm I’m still concerned with how hard Poison were doing it)
Lord, then put me away (God isn’t really a part of the judicial system, well he shouldn’t be, of course there are the underlying principles but…)
Heres to yaSolo
Chorus (3xs)
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